April 7 -four days to contest

2^nd time April 7, 2013

Scenes to rework highlighted

Everyone	Quieter putting welfare scene together. Still no people noises after Frank says his line about jobs. Need people noises in the second men’s scene. After Marie’s monologue – we need people noises. I don’t care who does it, but tools must be taken offstage.  The danger is noise when they fall. When someone drops a line, don’t look at them. Redo train scene – rushing it and there’s no screaming. Everyone is clumped in one spot. Wall comes out sooner. Winter during welfare scene. People noises do not need to stop until Reg says Okay okay. Strike with purpose Freezes are still not good. There was no coughing or sneezes in the welfare scene. Don’t drag props.
Billy	Notice  the sign at the beginning of the play before you pick it up and smile.
Reg and Frank’s fight	It was better.
Marie and Louis	Great job Kiss and smile – kiss looked authentic, but Marie moved her face in disgust and Louis did not smile afterwards Great job on capice – both reactions were great.
Allison	Hit the T in but Very believable Lost accent – you could lose your job.
Hannah	Good job welfare scene Good job with Reg in your first scene together Watch squeaking
Frank	Cross stage before the kids scene Great job looking concerned at the checkers. To hell with you – need vocals when you push back.
Paige	Whoa- not whoo hoo
Tucker	Louis, Louis….makeup gang…7:00 Wilcox gate (Say this on the US side of the barrel) During the three girls’ scene, take a drink when you are on the line. Work more right stage in the back. When you run off with the bag, keep running until you are about 3 feet outside the curtain line. Don’t anticipate the slap.
Cody	Dagos scene Take your time when you are mimicking.  Have other mimic for  you. Grunt when you are trying to attack Hilton. My name’s Louis was lost.
Graham	Yours and Hannah’s first scene together was believable. Diction – especially t’s
Girls	During Hannah and Graham’s scene, you are all the same level.
Music	What happened to the music in the second bar scene.
Cheyanne and all people in second bar scene	Dancing must be real – have fun with it.  Right now it looks like you are trying to get it perfect.
Men	Second men’s scene – Tucker was blocked. Be sure you are working US. Fade out the song in the mil scene. React to the heat. Vary gestures after “that’s it for today”
Avery	Voting scene – you are blocked. Watch moving during freezes.  Good expressions during the voting scene.
Michelle	Dissident workers – write your thoughts down. It was so good when you hit the pencil on your teeth?
Carson	Sit in your own chair. Many people with big egos would be offended if you took their chair.
Savannah	Great reaction to fight between Nate and Rose Say Yah’s differently Italian club to the audience Be sure you wear your wrist watch.
Tucker, graham and Cody	All standing the same way when talking to hIlton.
Nate and Rose	Work on both fight scenes.
Mac and Tucker	Be involved in scenes, not shaking hands in different ways. Pay attn to what is going on.
Plant vote	Mac Freeze.
Paige and Avery	React with each other during radio scene.
Cheyanne	Did not see you react to rain.
Women	Girls’ scene was better.
Redo	Fight scene – too quick. Redo Nate’s fight scene – too quick.
Mac -	When you hit the metal after the train scene – cross left stage not center stage so that we can see you.