April 14,
2013
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Don’t sway
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Avery at the beginning
Cody and Savannah – welfare scene
Graham and Cody –bar scene
Cody- talking to Hilton
Paige, Savannah, avery – hit the
bricks
Hannah – mortgage scene
Gate & WALL
Cody, Hannah, avery, Graham – when Nate
is hurt
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Women’s scene
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Hannah – get on Rose’s left side so
that we have two against one.
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Michelle
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Hit T in start I’ll start here
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Everyone
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People noises as Cody shouts order
order
People noises after Frank’s but our
jobs.
No
people noises after strike
TAKE ALL TAGS OUT OF COSTUMES – TY –
tag in hat.
Longer celebration after train leaves
and louder
At the beginning, people entering
stage area looks too rehearsed.
Diction- Blake wrote this several
times.
Rain stops on Hannah’s “foreclose”
Make sure to hide the snow machine.
After the welfare scene, we do not
have any weather except in the rain scene.
It is cold and it is hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don’t let the baby show.
Fix the pregnant pause in the welfare
scene
Cough into hands not elbows
Move the table back.
BUT OUR JOBS _ PEOPLE NOISES
Quiet moving when other scenes are the
focus.
Communists and perverts – people noises
STEP ON LINES
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Cheyanne
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Your emotions on your face are
starting to look rehearsed.
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Men
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Checkers – still do not feel your concern for Billy when he is
told to do the checkers. Still do not
feel that you feel the heat.
Graham’s whistling is louder than your
speaking – fix one and it better be the speaking.
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Reg
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Mean it when you say no, stop.
Fired me on the spot – Nah – step on
her line.
Tell everybody – watch hands.
Do you say stinking or stinkin?
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Paige
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Lift hat up. Don’t twirl umbrella
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Cody
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You lose your accent in first
Marie/Louis scene.
When upset at Hilton, we have to have
verbal noises.
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Carson
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Stress my in my steel mill
When Kelly says friendly – show her
the smile and continue.
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Billy
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SMILE and keep your head up.
Diction – hit consonants.
Watch a fire show to see how people
fall - backdraft
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Hannah
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Work on accent –hit consonants
Work on accent –hit consonants
BE LOUD
Still screechy
Fight back crying.
Stage business in each scene.
When you yelled Reggie, it was too
high pitched.
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Cody and Savannah
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Seems rehearsed
When you kiss at the beginning after
checkers scene – it looks rehearsed.
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Frank
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Fight back more with Graham –
especially vocally
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Nate
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Let’s see the anger grow before you
pull her hair.
Act hurt, keep head up. It hurts to breathe.
You need stage business when Rose
says, I clean houses all day.
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Savannah
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Watch putting in the wrong end of the
cig in your mouth – No one will want to kiss you if you have a burned up
mouth.
When frozen, wait until the sound to
move.
Great job waiting for the vote.
Your monologue must be in front.
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Billy and Nate
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Let’s go speech – step on lines
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Some parts of our show are getting very rehearsed as Blake pointed out today. Each time we do our show do something just a tad bit different each time we do the show, like sitting on the other side of the table or doing a different motion while striking. This will keep the show fresh and new and not so slow, dull, and rehearsed.
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