Sunday, February 17, 2013

February 17


February 17, 2013
Everyone
Much better second time around.
React to and about Michelle when she comes in contact with the strikers – on the strike and in the voting area.
Transition must be faster after the voting scene.
Don’t let the people noise die.
Change in the welfare scene. Most of you are doing this – being cold, dismayed, etc; but the people who are not “in to the scene” are causing the welfare scene to be unbelievable ( not unbelievable good).
BE QUIET changing all scenes.  Women’s shoes. 
Radio scene is good.
“youngest guy on the line” needs to be louder.
Know what the weather is.  Allison, give me the sheet you worked on for the weather and everyone needs to be on the same page. When it is hot, you need to be sweaty.
Hit the bricks – beat must be together
We need strikers on strike after scene 17.  Be out there.  Work, smoke, eat, drink. Find stage business.
Memorize lines!
The ending needs to be stronger and the hit more committed.  It is victorious.
We need smokers during the voting scene – no one outlawed smoking in public buildings
React    React    react
Exit in character
Hand out flyers in back before the vote is counted.
Watch hats in faces.
Keep the energy up all the way through.
At the end, we need more people throwing hats.  Do something different.
Don’t drag chairs.
Be different in each scene.
When Nate and Rose fight, girls whisper and gossip
We need more levels in the train scene
Girls need to sit up straight – wear corsets
When you talk in the welfare scene, make sure the audience can see you.
The transition from steel mill to the Marie Louis scene was better.
First bar scene was good.
First Hilton scene was good.
Hell with the rest of us scene was good
Second Hilton meeting was amazing.
Graham ‘s – order scene was good.
Rose, Marie’s and Hayden’s scene was good.
More strike signs at the end. 
Solidarity forever at the end was great.
Tucker
Need a relationship with Allison at the beginning
Be louder in the steel mill
Poles – you were blocked.
Must see a reaction to the slap.
Throw cards in the hat so that you seem disinterested in Allison.
At the end, you are hurt.  Act hurt.
Step on lines with Billy.
Be angrier at Billy for leaving you.
Jump sideways so that the men do not fight you so far back.
Hannah
Cheat out to the audience more.
Lost your accent at times.
Men
You must be louder in the steel mill.
Cody
We must see more of you going over to the other side.
Tucker and Hayden
More nervous about the bag.
Times
4:45 sec – Don’t come up here Reggie
9:30 You know the foreman in the change house
19 min –What are you going to do? This strike is a time to change.
24 – You mind me too, Capiche?
28:50-They deserve to be treated like people, not machines
33:30 – No, Billy, that’s not what we need.
Savannah
Still choppy
Frozen at the beginning – look at exit sign until you and Louis are spoken to.
To do
Women who are making sandwiches – wear aprons including Marie in the where’s marie scene.
Reg and Alice
Your relationship does not feel real.  The Ach dearie – is something they share – a secret code – make this endearing.
Look at the scene that you both missed twice – Don’t say that…
Nate & Billy
This must seem real.  Both of you are hot headed and spur of the moment kind of guys.  Hang on each other’s words.  Step on lines.
Nate and Rose
Develop the relationship more.  Where there is heart, the audience needs to see it.
Carson
Sit professionally and find busy work. – especially in first scene.
Frozen at the beginning
Paige
Lower voice
Allison
Keep looking for Nate as you did today.
Graham
Move action of looking for Savannah farther CS.  Ask several people and be looking for her before you see her.  CIGARETTES
More over the top with Marie and Vinnie.
Slap your hat to your legs after she says capiche.
Hayden
Say Glory Days reverently
Light
Spot on Hayden until he blows dust then lights on everyone.
Ty
Must see you in the line about sticking together.
Cody
Quicker to find Billy during the first two stanzas of the song.
Mac and Savannah
Bar scene – slow mo when you are not the focus.
Mac
Don’t laugh in the wall scene.
Lights and everyone
Train scene – brief blackout before Ty and Reg bump.

4 comments:

  1. I was not present for this practice I was in Oklahoma. But what I heard was that so much improvement was shown! That makes me so happy to hear. From what I heard the clinic was a great success. We really stepped it up coomparing to last week. Freida feels we have a much better shot at a district title than we did before.

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  2. Is most of these i have read mrs.couch is always telling y'all to react. Like during the fight scene y'all just kinda stand their ackwardly. Think like this what would you do if it was real act like this whole play is real do what you would do if it wad scream yell. If you guys would react more and show more emotion it would look even awesomer than it already does. From the sounds of it y'all have a lot of work to do but you can achieve it if you try as hard as you can and remember keep an awesome attitude

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  3. Guys, it is awesome to be working with all of y'all! We have so much fun all the time! But, because of that, sometimes we get distracted and break character, me worst of all. Let's all work on that together!

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  4. I believe we have improved so much since the last clinic! keep up the good work guys. I think the train scene needs work. Just with freezing and making it look more realistic. Overall everyone keep improving we are headed to were we need to be for contest!

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