March 26, 2013
Everyone
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Overall – great job on the
performance last night!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We just need to polish now. We have two
days to do this. Be in my room
tomorrow by 8:30. We will have time to rework scenes. Think about which ones we have trouble
with.
Can’t hear people center stage and at cooper, you will have to be
really loud.
Pervert would get more reaction – he is calling you bad names.
After HIT THE BRICKS –some yell while other sing. Union song
should be hearty – passionate and LOUD
Every actor – how have you changed during the play?
DO NOT TALK TO THE FLOOR.
Heads up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
People noises after Frank and Reg’s argument.
Hell with us – people noises – you are angry.
Quiet getting
second bar scene fixed.
Set changes are too loud.
Don’t drag the set – be quiet so it is not distracting.
Umbrella scene – deathly cold everyone is despondent. WE HAVE TO HAVE CONTRASTS. The transition after that is sad too.
Nate’s fight scene – we must have deeper voices and deep shouting.
When Frank says think I’m right hit(MAC) & celebrate.
Step on lines more in the intro.
Girls – deeper and more noise during Frank and Reg fight.
More people noises before and during Cody’s Order Order
Share umbrellas
Struggle with the umbrellas because it is windy.
ACCENTS AND DICTION _ EVERYONE
LEVELS
Be confident mumbling – don’t look like you are mumbling.
More strikers and passing out flyers – flyers are passed out before
results of the vote, then both signs and flyers after result.
Cough and sneeze in welfare scene.
IT IS SAD!!!!!!!!!!! BUT PAY
ATTENTION TO WHO IS TALKING!
Lost lines in mill scene.
Accents were a problem
Cheers must have more levels – it still sounds like everyone is
saying yeah at the same level- men and women.
Clap. Stamp your feet BE DIFFERENT!
In
Frank’s work council line, everyone is in a straight line.
Be
quiet when it is Hilton and Kelly’s scene.
Walking was too loud on the radio
static scene. You need to be in the room when static begins. Savannah – turn on
the radio.
After train celebration, we could not
hear it’s a bust. Michelle, wait until
the last yell to talk.
More levels and panic when Reg says
the police are coming.
Perverts reaction looked fake. Kayla said we have the case of the haunted radio. It came on because no one turned it on. No one was affected by the wind. In the train scene, hands must be up in a believable motion. |
Men
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In the back – you are working well, but we need
more levels. That is why we have gray
set on top of gray set. We also need
men on the floor, but not everyone.
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Allison
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You are losing your accent a lot. - lost half your jobs.
Cry Cry Cry
Emotional – cry slammed the door in my face.
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Jared
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We need to see the decision why you pick up the bag.
Pull your cap up. Still a shadow.
At the beginning, SMILE at the audience. Let us see the good times in your memory on
your face.
React to each scene facially – use people noises too. Smile – ay growl during Hilton, etc.
Accent was
consistent.
Work on onion union scene.
Glory days – mystical and
sentimental SMILE
When you are narrating, be in the light so we know what your job is. |
Michelle and Carson
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Look at what happened scene.
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Hannah, Savannah, Avery, Paige, Cheyanne
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Don’t believe you are tired of the strike.
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Mac
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We need to work more on the mustache. Did it come off?
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Cheyanne & Paige
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Good job on working together
on the sign in the bar scene.
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Alice
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We changed by getting a union – work on this. YOU are not strong
enough.
Saying REGGIE _ SCREAM AND CRY
UMBRELLA IN THE WALKIN AROUND
DRIVING ME CRAZY SCENE
Louder on mortgage.
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Nate
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DICTION – hit consonants even with accent. Much better last night.
Use upstage hand to gesture.
Build to the violence.
BE HURT Throughout that scene – not in and out. Much better – groan more.
Crew chief to audience.
Louis, Louis – did you hear?
Slow down and say it more to the audience.
Good job reacting to checkers line. WONDERFUL JOB last night. |
Reg and Alice
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Be more of a couple. Touch moer.
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Cody
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More love.
When she says capice luigi – do something funny - 1940’s funny
Work on Italian accent especially in yours and Marie’s scene.
angry about dagos.
Slow down and exaggerate the part about the boss and the oil. Command
the stage.
Don’t sway in scenes.
On police siren scene – men are ready for action when Billy says get
the barricades.
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Frank
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Louder after train scene.
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Kelly, Frank, Carson, Photographer
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Move your scene more CS so that we get a view of the picture taking
scene more and so that no one touches the curtain.
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Rose
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Mac
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No jacket in the steel mill.
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Billy and Reg & Frank
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Look and gesture toward
your memory – a slow gesture. Reg be
dreamlike.
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Louis and Marie
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Don’t anticipate each other’s lines.
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Reg
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More heart – cry- foreclosing
is the end. Not only did you lose your
house but everyone else’s. This is the
end LOUDER
Go at Billy – PEOPLE NOISES- a guttural cry when you jump at him.
Pick up some of the Canadian accent. I wouldn’t ask if I didn’t think
you could do it. Get hints from Ty and
Jared.
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Marie
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Fuller brush men – don’t let
this die.
Make sure you turn the radio on BIG so we don’t have a gap between
scenes. IT was late last night.
Slam your picket sign and be mad when you say it is your strike too.
It is still not strong enough.
The hair bump needs to go. You have to be unkempt, weary, and poor.
Lost accent in welfare scene. |
Lights
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On snow!!!!!!!!!!!! Cole and
Lane
Turn lights off Rose and Paige after fight. Keep it on Reg and Alice – Jared will move.
– Jared- get emotional during that scene.
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Nathan Photographer & Little reg
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Head up on the ladder.
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Nathan and Cole
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Be careful that we do not see your shadow on the cyc when you are
holding the spot.
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I'm not sure what you mean by look at what happened scene.
ReplyDeleteI need to be louder because my parents told me they couldn't hear me and they were in the first section of seats. So tomorrow during practice I'll work on that and fix it.
Savahannah needs to just remember to turn on the radio. Try walking over and get a drink or some food and just stand next to the radio
ReplyDeleteI am going to remember the snow machine and try and keep clothes more organized back stage. Also I am going to remind Alyssa to make sure to turn off the barrel in the train blackout scene! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm going to try and watch those that don't have lines to make sure they don't look like they aren't doing anything. Great job to everyone. We just need to polish it and practice like there is no tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteI am super excited for contest Thursday :]] We really are doing well. A couple things I noticed, boys need to wear gloves when it is cold. Tucker warmed his hands on the fire in the back and it's the first I have seen that in a while :]] good job! And well everyone has improved so much :] it's amazing
ReplyDeleteTo improve the play I will try to be as quiet as possible moving the furniture, and not clink the glasses while another scene is going on. I will also try to lower my boy voice more, and always be in the moment and pay attention to what is happening.
ReplyDeleteFor the men in the play it should be hard to treat the women with the same respect they would show to another man, whenever the guys say their strike instead of our strike they say that that because that's how they were raised. Women didn't really get jobs that men had until the Second World War because all the men were fighting for this country. So women act like you want the respect you had during the war when you had those jobs that the men now hold in the play.
ReplyDeleteOne more thing lets take district and go all the way to state
Lets try and be as quite as possible when moving the furniture it was extremely loud at area. Especially in the beginning before the play started.
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